Monday, June 22, 2009

The Visit Comments

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Death in the doorway
picking at the lock
while the man in the room
watches the clock.
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W.I. Stoneberger
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Sue Sie 22 June 2009

Hands of the clock are ticking as time disappears from us all...a very imaginitive poem...well written...10++ Sue

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Fiona Davidson 22 June 2009

Brilliant piece William...vivid descriptive...powerful words...Fi 10++++

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