Friday, April 14, 2006

The Vision. Comments

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I had a vision
a thought in my mind
that all men and women
were equal in kind
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Linda Ori 15 April 2006

Hopefully only a vision. Beautiful poem and wonderful imagery, as always. Linda

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***** ********* 15 April 2006

Dear Sir knight, I believe that these words of your poem, 'all men and women were equal in kind' are the key to fullfilling your vision. As Patricia says it does have a serene religous feel to it, both at the beginning and the last verse. Very much in keeping with what Easter is truly about. Thanks for sharing,10 from Tai, equal in her own minds eye.

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Patricia Gale 14 April 2006

A wonderful vision. The begining took me to the time of Christ. A deserving thing for the nearing day of Easter. Well done Sir. Patricia

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