Friday, March 13, 2009

The Vision Comments

Rating: 5.0

getting ready to go to bed
a vision came into my head
the vision was quite blurry
so i tried to hurry.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 October 2009

Faith faith faith the essence in spirituality well addressed. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK Invite you to read and comment: LINGERIE- IG [new post.] Enigmatic Navel or other poems niv

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Kranthi Pothineni 15 March 2009

From the start to end you perfectly carry the feel of the poem with a smooth flow of words...nice one.Thanks for sharing.

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Sandra Fowler 14 March 2009

A very spiritual experience. No wonder you wrote a poem about it. Thank you for sharing. Warm regards, Sandra

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