Wednesday, November 3, 2021

The Virtual World Has Taken Over The Real World. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I long to sit quietly under the shade of a Pipal tree,
Where the heat of the sun comes in with the cold air.

By laying down on the cot and stretching my legs
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M. Asim Nehal
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 08 November 2021

It is time of virtual world. An amazing experience we have gained. A brilliant perception you have shared here. Thank you very much for sharing.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 November 2021

A beauty of a poem, recalling the good old days.5 stars.

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Rebecca Navarre 03 November 2021

Such heart and days of beauty written into this! .. So true rarely do you see the children picking flowers or running round outside, like back in the days. An excellent poem! .. Filled with beauty! ... Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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Gordon Walter 03 November 2021

My days at farmhouse: I long to smell the loaves being roasted in the Tandoor And then run to extinguish a coal fire with water.

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Martinez Salotori 03 November 2021

Nice small wishes, packed in small package.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 November 2021

Yes, it's so. The covid-19 pandemic has a blessing in disguise. Everything has become virtual but in realistic dimension. A prudent write..top score.

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M. Asim Nehal

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