Friday, February 24, 2006

The Village Well Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can you keep a secret,
and promise not to tell.
That is what the people said,
about the village well.
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sylvia spencer
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Gina Onyemaechi 24 February 2006

Spellbinding story, Sylv. I think I'd have liked a more moral ending, some kind of come-uppance against the village for its heartlessness. But then, why should you? It's your crazy write! ! ! (And I mean 'crazy' in the warmest of senses. I wouldn't be giving you a 10 otherwise) . Warm regards from I-wasn't-born-under-Bow-Bells-either, Gina. PS. I know Plumstead and Abbey Wood a little bit. Warmly, Gina.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 February 2006

Hi! Sylvia Could this be true? Leaves me guessing but very interesting all the same.Love Duncan

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Cj Heck 24 February 2006

Interesting story, Sylvia. It held me from start to finish. You might want to fix one place: 'everytime it was mentioned, it fell upon death (should be deaf) ears.' Nice read. Warmest regards, CJ

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