Friday, January 24, 2020

The Village Drunkard Comments

Rating: 5.0

Reeks of alcohol
His body, his breath alike
Shabbily dressed and unkept
With speeches slurred and unclear
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Kingsley Egbukole
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Michael Walker 27 January 2020

A poem which is both serious and humorous. The drunkard can only stagger along, unsure where he is going. Then he changes direction, as if is happening before my eyes. I don't think it is good that he spies on people like lovers and is a busybody regarding other people's private business. So I couldn't call this drunkard 'the conscience of the community'. Inspired writing nevertheless.

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Kingsley Egbukole 27 January 2020

Thanks Michael. I appreciate your comment.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 January 2020

This is really a very sad commentary on the drug addiction in our society. You have made the story very interesting by your style of writing, of course with a strong message. Thanks for sharing.10++

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Kingsley Egbukole 26 January 2020

Lovely comment dear Panda. I appreciate.

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Kesav Easwaran 25 January 2020

A true story. Liked the enjoyable narration 10+

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 January 2020

Happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 January 2020

A well known drunkard! With the card of his life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 January 2020

A very popular village member. Thanks

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Kostas Lagos 24 January 2020

Behind the foolishness, the drunken image, lies a wise man. To my list

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 January 2020

Completely agree with you Kostas. Thanks for finding this poem worthy of your poem list.

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Tulsi Shrestha 24 January 2020

Intense and powerful ink, beautifully crafted

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Kingsley Egbukole 25 January 2020

Very beautiful comment. Thank you

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Panagiota Romios 24 January 2020

Drunkards do Get Sober and Stay Sober! They are in every field and profession. We do not know Ther Pasts. We see them sober. Alcoholism is a physical disease with a mental component. Many die... Some do get sober. We laugh at drunks, not realizing they are ill with a terminal illness. We do not laugh at cancer patients. Do we? 10+ Hemingway and other wartists were drunks. Something to ponder 10+

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Kingsley Egbukole 24 January 2020

I quite agree with you dear friend. Remain blessed

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