Thursday, September 14, 2017

The Village Comments

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the village torn apart
incessant quarrels everywhere
the village head drunk
his wife picking quarrels
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Jabulani Mzinyathi
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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 04 October 2017

I did get this poem correctly, I am sure, and I really like it. Please my poem MY KING IS SICK AND OLD Its quite similar to yours.

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 04 October 2017

you would not have missed that. we share the same back ground and writing is usually organic

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Gajanan Mishra 14 September 2017

tottering on the brink of death- life

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Jabulani Mzinyathi 04 October 2017

such is the situation in my homeland

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