Friday, July 27, 2018

The View Of Misty Eyes! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Misty eyes see everything everywhere in smoke...;
For the misty eyes, everything looks to be vague;
Real world and all happenings look as dream world;
Unless the eyes are clear and clean, all are vague!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2018

When all things are not in one's favour, misty eyes, Dizzy mind and booze keep one float in dream world to Overcome the rigour of world life unbearable and one Can't stop things happening beyond one's control ever! Sparkling poetic expression my friend! A beautiful piece of work! (10)

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Ramesh T A 27 July 2018

Thank you for reading and quoting the lines you liked that make my poem a beautiful piece!

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