Thursday, August 7, 2014

The Victims Comments

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No one
Will ever know
The pain... you went through
We can say that we do
...
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Lyn Paul
COMMENTS
Unwritten Soul 25 August 2014

This is amazing written poem from you Lyn, one of the most expressive poem from you...it has its own spot light..all the great next poem waiting for you_Soul

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

Beautiful poem Lyn. This poem reflects in different angles. Many powerful messages, this poem carries. Very true said, no one knows what you went through, only you know, those who know they tried to avoid to look into it. To be frank no one will come to help. We only have to sail our boat through toughest storm. There are many people who pass through the same storms, instead of giving one selves to storm, one show and lead other how to be stronger at the time of storms. One should not be a victim but a leader to guide others to sail smoothly through harsh realities of life. Poem with great Indepth meaning. I feel this poem is written just for me. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing with us Lyn.

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Neela Nath Das 16 August 2014

A stupendous write! Very beautifully you expressed your compassion for the victims.

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Hazel Durham 10 August 2014

Your understanding of the terrible treatment of innocent people who were made to feel guilty about what their predators did to them, the suffering the victims went through was so shocking, you have beautifully written a poem full of hope for the victims! Thanks for sharing Lyn!

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Dee Corpolongo 10 August 2014

Excellent poem, Lyn, about a very sad subject.. Very wise words are expressed in this poem, along with some understanding and compassion. Beautiful Lyn, thank you.

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Amitava Sur 10 August 2014

A very well expressed poem where you said that a victim should not be discouraged for no fault of her / him. Thanks for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 09 August 2014

All that glistens is not gold - we are so often hoodwinked into thinking that certain people are wonderful when, in fact, they are far from it. Well expressed in your poem Lyn, well done.

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