Tuesday, September 13, 2011

The Very End Comments

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I find a spoon
And hold it over a flame
there’s no one
But myself to blame.
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David Longoria
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Liliana Roman 19 March 2012

be careful is all i have to say. don't find that spoon too much or else you end will come sooner than you want it to.

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 03 January 2012

Great poem amazingly written we have a lot in comon but one thing else we need is to be careful

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

My soul reaches out to you, as your words draw me in...hugs n blessings

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