Monday, October 2, 2017

The Verity Comments

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Sometimes we feel, life is of no use
Death is destined, what of life then?
What isn't for that we yen?
A jerky approach to life, indeed it is
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Muhammad Murad
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Jazib Kamalvi 11 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Murad. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Muhammad Murad 11 October 2017

Thanks and I have read your poem. It is the true depiction of Love and Lust!

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Muhammad Murad

Lahore, Pakistan
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