Wednesday, March 18, 2009

***the Vendor Comments

Rating: 2.9

I as usual intended to take bath
Decided to sit below erected shower,
When I started water came with flow
Before I sensed waste of water,
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Shekhar Joshi 22 March 2009

wow that is good and the fountain vendor really beautiful excellent work

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

interesting composition tricky in a way in your last three verses, a poetic narration of the beautiful vendor....Thanks for sharing! ! !

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