Friday, August 21, 2009

' The Velvet Strand Comments

Rating: 2.8

Along this cosmic filament
Flows wisdom, subconscious awareness -
From one corner of the world to another,
Differences dissolve into realization
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Vaibhav Pandey 26 August 2009

a really wonderful poem ma'm....essence of oneness beautifully highlighted.....excellent! !

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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 August 2009

I touched carefully and it's really a velvet strand!

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Marilyn Lott 22 August 2009

All of the posibilities you describe is part of what makes life so thoroughly exciting. Loved it! ! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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The only comment that commensurate the majesty of this work are these line; your lines “Within a sea of ‘others’ Why do we recognize That one specific person Seen only through our eyes”

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tom mc quade 21 August 2009

such a expansive vision..well contained and explored here in your poem...lol..yep..it resonated and struck a 'chord' within me...as it was supposed to :) tom

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Ramesh T A 21 August 2009

Interesting exploration! It happens! Spiritually connectivity takes place between persons before they actually meet in person and when it happens it is felt that they have met already somewhere! It shows that there is interdependence among all!

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Daniel Kempson 21 August 2009

An intrigueing write Linda, you conjure so many possibilities, a thought provoking write Daniel 10

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 21 August 2009

A Socratic statement, if i ever read one....Do you know Plato too, or The Wizard of Oz & Toto too? ! lol! .....A theory with much substance, Midnight...A bit Cranial, for a blonde tho', don't you think? HAH! Tres bon, mon ami! FjR

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