Sunday, April 27, 2008

The Veiled Tints Of Blackbirds Comments

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They roost upon the railing, stentorian.
Laser-eyed sentries scanning the vista,
they will guard the nest on the roof
‘til the last hatchling gets its wings.
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Sonny Rainshine
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Abha Sharma 27 April 2008

your poem has a deep imagery...yes the perception is in parts... not a complete whole coz of its vastness...there is so much hidden from our mortal eye, ..many universes.... a thought provoking one....

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