Sunday, October 4, 2015

The Veil Comments

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Will you meet me on the morrow where the river meets the dale?

With warm golden rolls and wild berries spread, and the tallest of all tall tales.
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Edmund Strolis
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Rini Shibu 07 September 2018

Lift the unnatural viel completes the beauty of love..nicely written

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Edmund Strolis 07 September 2018

Yes Rini one might think that this is sheer poetic romanticism and yet I say to this are there not berries? Is there not a sun and easy blanket spread before glad smiles, why must such moments be considered so rare? All things are possible when time is easily arrested and a simple feast easily gathered is shared. Rich simplicity is savored and cherished and all cares slip away.

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Pamela Sinicrope 05 October 2015

Thank God for this poem! I want to taste those warm golden rolls and eat the wild berry spread! The last line is so romantic and full of love. WOW! Glad I read this. The unnatural veil gone. Let go of silly convention and embrace live, love, ALL of it.... It's natural.

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