Wednesday, June 18, 2008

The Vase Fell On The Floor Comments

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The vase fell on the floor
Now that vase doesn’t exist any more
Shattered and smattered
Pieces of baked clay that once come from earth
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Rani Turton
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Mamta Agarwal 08 July 2008

philosophical write, wonderfully expressed. thanks Rani. this body is just a vessel, to hold our souls which never prishes, its an irony we never access it

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Iohannes Silvaticus 03 July 2008

Really deep and profound. The concluding sentence sums up life perfectly - how everything must come full circle.

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Duncan Wyllie 02 July 2008

Another great way to see how we are all connected Wonderful poem Love duncan X

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Chitra - 02 July 2008

wonderful. awakens the dormant side jumpstarts us into action that we better get to work leave an indelible mark before its too late

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Flora Gillingham 01 July 2008

As always, seeing the universal in the particular! Fx

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premji premji 01 July 2008

But Rani, Just remember this sublime truth: you are that emptiness inside the vessal. neither vessal nor clay, you are that!

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 20 June 2008

several days behind our eyes then we return to paradise......10

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 June 2008

dust we are and to dust we return, , , , well penned rani

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Abha Sharma 18 June 2008

All life is transitory…, the base of all change is dust… Life rotated by dust Matter changed to flux …………………….philosophical and realistic poem. Abha

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Lynda Robson 18 June 2008

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, a very thought-provoking poem Rani, well penned, Lynda xxx

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Rema Prasanna 18 June 2008

Philosophical a bit, we all end as dusts on a decided time frame, a deep thought Rani, you brought forward. thank you for sharing. liked it 10+

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