The vase fell on the floor
Now that vase doesn’t exist any more
Shattered and smattered
Pieces of baked clay that once come from earth
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Really deep and profound. The concluding sentence sums up life perfectly - how everything must come full circle.
Another great way to see how we are all connected Wonderful poem Love duncan X
wonderful. awakens the dormant side jumpstarts us into action that we better get to work leave an indelible mark before its too late
But Rani, Just remember this sublime truth: you are that emptiness inside the vessal. neither vessal nor clay, you are that!
several days behind our eyes then we return to paradise......10
All life is transitory…, the base of all change is dust… Life rotated by dust Matter changed to flux …………………….philosophical and realistic poem. Abha
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust, a very thought-provoking poem Rani, well penned, Lynda xxx
Philosophical a bit, we all end as dusts on a decided time frame, a deep thought Rani, you brought forward. thank you for sharing. liked it 10+
philosophical write, wonderfully expressed. thanks Rani. this body is just a vessel, to hold our souls which never prishes, its an irony we never access it