Sunday, April 1, 2012

The Vase Comments

Rating: 3.5

An empty vase upon the table
decorously awaiting your return.
What flowers do you ceremoniously
bring, ambrosial dreams to bloom,
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Robert Leary
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Hans Vr 13 April 2012

This is a nice poem. The choice of the images allows for various interpretations and that often makes a poem very interesting. Skilful use of contrasts.

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Besa Dede 03 April 2012

Beautiful stanzas Robert, I really enjoyed the image Regards, ~Besa

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Ramesh Rai 01 April 2012

but soon beauty will transcend you'll lay them lifeless in the sun a memory An emotional, i like it.

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Robert Leary

Robert Leary

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