Friday, September 12, 2008

The Vampire's Embrace Comments

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Here, on the ashes of Eden I stand
Alone. The horizon changes from grey to black
Tired eyes scour the clouds for silver
And as always, find just dust and smoke
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Laura Greene
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Margualette van der Merwe 21 October 2008

Very interesting, quite like it nicely done!

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Imogen Lee Greene 12 September 2008

awesome, because I get the persona of the vampire from the first to last verse. ~ Luvving dat last name.

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