Thursday, April 21, 2005

The Vampire Comments

Rating: ★4.8

I was walking down the river bank it was just the other night
When a vampire with a fishing rod gave me a real bad fright
'I haven't had a bite all day' it said and bared its drooling fangs
'A pint or two of your cool blood will cure my hunger pangs'
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Bridgid Patrick
baby fishing river Confusion
COMMENTS
Robert E Hann 07 December 2006

HAHA...a good read. Words and rhyme flow nicely. RH

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Ernestine Northover 08 November 2005

Good, gruesome and it grabs you! . Well done. Sincerely Ernestine

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Uriah Hamilton 11 October 2005

This poem is funny but be careful with those vampires.

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Mary Nagy 21 April 2005

This is very cute! ! You've got a great rhythm to it. I really enjoyed it. Nicely done. Sincerely, Mary

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Bridgid Patrick

Bridgid Patrick

London
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London
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