Friday, June 25, 2021

The Value Of Life & Oxygen Comments

Rating: 4.8

Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
We shall thank you then for death.
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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M.J. Lemon 20 July 2021

Those first two stanzas really capture our human frailties. Magnificent verse!

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Susan Williams 05 July 2021

Top ratings on this poem straight from your heart and soul!

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Susan Williams 05 July 2021

Those opening lines are a heavenly gift to your readers!

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 June 2021

Great message worth following. Very nice poem

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Lyn Paul 27 June 2021

You have shared so much with us. Thank you for your words.

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M Asim Nehal 26 June 2021

Superb poem with great message. Liked it.5*****

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Lasaad Tayeb 25 June 2021

A fantastically crafted poem; truly, beautiful, you've written a delightful story.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 June 2021

This poem was a joy to read

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2021

Great thoughts to ponder about. Very discerning and well expressed write. Top Marks, ! ! To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 June 2021

What a wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! An encompassing write that tackles spirituality and intricacies of life.

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