Dear God I thank you
for every single precious breath
And when you'll place us in paradise
We shall thank you then for death.
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A fantastically crafted poem; truly, beautiful, you've written a delightful story.
Great thoughts to ponder about. Very discerning and well expressed write. Top Marks, ! ! To my Poem List.
What a wonderful poem! ! ! ! ! An encompassing write that tackles spirituality and intricacies of life.
Those first two stanzas really capture our human frailties. Magnificent verse!