Monday, January 16, 2012

The Valley Of The Alley Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I walked through the valley
The valley of life or the other
Dark and winded is the other alley
I couldn’t foretell if I even bother
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Jeline Loh
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Jeline Loh Jen-Li 19 January 2012

Thank you so much! It excites me to know that! :)

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Dead Rose 17 January 2012

beautiful poem, , good rhythm good rhyme 10******** Rose)))))))))

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Dave Walker 17 January 2012

Nice flowing poem, good write.

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