Wednesday, November 15, 2017

The Valley Of Kashmir Comments

Rating: 5.0

She asked the teller to tell a tale
she has never heard earlier.
She asked an artist to make a portrait
she has never seen earlier.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Binayakumar Mohanty 26 November 2017

The echo of her cries broke the glaciers And there was only blood only blood.We have long ago killed and still killing the art and artist from the valley.Nicely crafted poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 22 November 2017

The poet with a cold deep sigh exclaimed I see red flowers in this valley but where is the fragrance of roses instead I smell blood, only blood! The valley burst out into tears The echo of her cries broke the glaciers and there was blood only blood! - - - - - - - - -So poignantly depicted the pains and cries of Kashmir valley.

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Valsa George 19 November 2017

Yes, Kashmir the valley of flowers.. of red tulips- has now become a valley of blood! So sad! Great poem Akhtarji!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2017

The way of presentation is fantastic. The beginning is haunting where as concluding is gloomy. Let me quote... She asked the teller to tell a tale she has never heard earlier ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! but where is the fragrance of roses instead I smell blood, only blood! The valley burst out into tears It is a heart touching poem on ' The Valley Of Kashmir ' Thank u sir.10

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Indira Renganathan 15 November 2017

The poet with a cold deep sigh exclaimed I see red flowers in this valley but where is the fragrance of roses instead I smell blood, only blood! The valley burst out into tears The echo of her cries broke the glaciers and there was blood only blood! .......touching words...let us hope for peace....good thought, good work...thank you Akhtar....thanks for your kind comments too

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 November 2017

The valley burst out into tears The echo of her cries broke the glaciers -'The Valley of Kashmir' is a fabulous poem. Enjoyed the wonderful poetic expression..10

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Muhammad Ali 15 November 2017

blood. that is the most expensive fertilizer for hope...

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