Saturday, April 2, 2016

The Vagabonds Comments

Rating: 4.7

Winter has gone.
Spring has gone,
The flowery bushes are gone too;
Their place is now taken up by the vagabonds
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Jasbir Chatterjee
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M Asim Nehal 18 April 2016

A touchy poem indeed, The heat waves are waiting for them to test their patience and perseverance.

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Ency Bearis 05 April 2016

Well versed evoking pathos to the Vagabonds.

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Kishore Kumar Das 05 April 2016

God bless and protect those vagabonds......nice lines by you..

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Randhir Kaur 02 April 2016

I take the opportunity to felicitate u for completing 60 th journey here.. Written very nicely..poignant art of work..worth praising prose..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 April 2016

A real portrait of urban homeless ones. Your selection of words are superb madam. I felt attracted to your poem at the very outset. I would love to go through all of your poems as soon as I have time. Thanks for the poem, nice and beautiful.Subhas

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Jasbir Chatterjee 02 April 2016

This is my 60th poem on my webpage on this site. Thank you, PH, for all the love and attention I have received here.

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