line 1 I'd delete 3rd comma
line 6 " No Big Brothers demanding I have no choice" i agree.
But it can be " a tough call" **.
** " (chiefly US, idiomatic) A choice or judgment which is difficult to make, especially one involving only two alternatives."
line 7 maybe 'worms IN'? taking the apple's freedom?
The poem is a VERY STRONG personal statement of belief and defiance!
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call me from jail
bri
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line 1 I'd delete 3rd comma line 6 " No Big Brothers demanding I have no choice" i agree. But it can be " a tough call" **. ** " (chiefly US, idiomatic) A choice or judgment which is difficult to make, especially one involving only two alternatives." line 7 maybe 'worms IN'? taking the apple's freedom? The poem is a VERY STRONG personal statement of belief and defiance! to MyPoemList call me from jail bri :)