Friday, December 11, 2020

The Vaccine Blues Comments

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Oh, joy, the magic, potion is here?
To be injected in the arm, not my derrière.

I am no fool to buy eternal life swishing in a needle via a potion.
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Panagiota Romios
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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

line 1 I'd delete 3rd comma line 6 " No Big Brothers demanding I have no choice" i agree. But it can be " a tough call" **. ** " (chiefly US, idiomatic) A choice or judgment which is difficult to make, especially one involving only two alternatives." line 7 maybe 'worms IN'? taking the apple's freedom? The poem is a VERY STRONG personal statement of belief and defiance! to MyPoemList call me from jail bri :)

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Kim Barney 11 December 2020

This virus has all of us singing the blues! Enjoyed reading.

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