The Vacancy Of You Comments
A vacancy is in my heart
your love has gone away
and we have grown apart
no longer are you in my day
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Poetic words are nicely uttered by an accomplished poet in this poem. Excellent write! Well done, Aqua!
Vacancies mean there is an opening to fill. So all hope is not lost! Thanks Robert!
An unoccupied/empty heart where even loneliness cannot be felt - a really good poem.
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7/28/2025 7:39:11 AM # 1.0.0
Aqua is a very very nice poem. You managed to play so beautifully with being and the vakance! congrats! Big 10...... dr. Riza
thank you for this comment. I had missed it and did not reply.