Saturday, June 11, 2016

The V Comments

Rating: 5.0

At this time of the year, the big oak trees on both side
Of street are loaded with emerald green leaves.
Where the street ends, it creates a huge V in sky.
When the sun recedes into soft evening and birds come to roost,
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 20 June 2016

and the geese were flying in a V-formation, i suppose? U.S.nickels used to have a capital V, Roman numeral 5, on one side. of course i'm not so old that i remember them! nice, Savita. may you always find peace in nature! bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 21 June 2016

Thanks Bri for reading and commenting. Yes I do find peace in Nature.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 June 2016

Empty quiet street I made a V on nature's impressive canvas. Keen observations and interpretations. Effect of the perspective which converts three dimensional nature into two dimensional screen of the eye. Nature's secret is beautifully revealed.

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Savita Tyagi 12 June 2016

Thank you Tirupati Ji for your comment. Appreciate your reading the poem.

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2016

Oh Savita, this is gorgeous. You were so right in what a connection to nature can do for one's spirit. A 10

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Savita Tyagi 11 June 2016

Thank you so much Kelly. Your comment means so much to me.

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