Sunday, June 19, 2011

The Usual Suspects Comments

Rating: 5.0

what moves outside of time-
what moves in a clear sky,
that makes us move?
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Patti Masterman
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Sandra Martyres 20 June 2011

Another great piece Patti...It is good to be visiting PF - at least to read your poems! !

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 20 June 2011

Good questions and good answer. Loved the way you symbolized the wind. It's a great poetry. Please get 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'My beloved father' on page 9.

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Talal Athar 19 June 2011

o m g o m g what a terrific flow! ! loved it.... :) good work...10 do read en rate mine as well :)

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