what is it they are 'getting' from me-
thought the stream-
as it was passing by the two of them.
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I am much impressed by the poem....... really a creative thought and penned in a simple and eloquent way.
very meaningful...impressive great concept flowing like a significant stream... something in it is so touching.. i like this....really has deep meaning... 10++++++
This was a very creative writing. I am very impressed by this. I thought the tone was absolutely wonderful. The atmosphere was perfect, as was the whole presentation of the piece. I can't say enough good things about it. Just tremendous! GW62
Some things in life seem constant, but a river can change courses.
Good imagery with an interesting tale behind it... another good write Samanyan
the user....for me, there are two kinds...the good user and the bad...which is whch, it depends on human's perspective.. naizz
The interaction between man and nature is always interesting. But we seldom get feedback from streams, etc. Praise for your rich imagination. Kind regards, Sandra
Short but substantive. Thanks for sharing.
a very nice imaginative write sir....very interesting indeed
very beautiful, how often we ignore the obvious, right in front of our eyes. in life too we try to think of eways somebody can be useful. deep reflection, in a state of zen10 Mamta