The Urn Comments

I am sure this was written soon after you lost your love! I can sense that raw intensity of the feelings of a frustrated lover in these lines. Now that you have collected the ashes of your love in an urn, submerge it in the holy waters of oblivion so that you can be back to yourself and not a spectral image of your old, vivacious self! A profuse flow of painful emotions!

A nice description of human sentiments, words appear as mermaids smoothly swimming in the waves of beautiful lines and the poem appears a river traveling to the the sea of eternity...............