The Urge, The Prayer, And The Fall Comments

Awesome devotional piece of poetry. You're very talented. Gracing your poems with beautiful rhyme scheme is not only appropriate, but also poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing Rehnuma.

May be I am a sinner, but my soul is pure, Still it possesses a glimpse of divinity of yours. It groans and moans in the mess of Earth- Tormented and troubled from the time of birth......beautiful poem dear poetem...... fine and simple and elegant. tony

Nice one! Your poem has a unique flavour.

A pleasant reading of verse; eternal human quests are answered in your prayer in form of poetic urge. nice creation. But, slight editing here and there will do a world of good to the poem.