Friday, July 14, 2006

The Upper Hand Comments

Rating: 5.0

I crouch like a lion
Lurking for unsuspecting prey,
Patience is the key:
I’m willing to wait for eternity
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Uriah Hamilton
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Ernestine Northover 14 July 2006

A spectacular write Uriah, a grand shout and shaking of fists. Very well produced. Par excellence. Love Ernestine XXX

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Goldy Locks 14 July 2006

dig how you pull the reader in with the first few lines, Uriah & then you dont let us go. with your style & images. powerful, redemptive - does justice to the title. Sus

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Konjit Berhane 14 July 2006

Wow...WoW.. well said Uriah...good going.... a Powerful poem ain't this the best you have ever written i just keep on loving what you write.... ...and you know what you have the upper hand in every thing just...try hard... keep the great poems coming...for i will be waiting... **KoNi**

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