The Untold Story Comments

This is really the first child story, I'm also a first child but God has been faithful through it all, this poem is touching, thank you Charity for this poem. Nice writing.

Profound, very revealing concerning the lack of justice in the world.

A touching poem nicely penned..........................................10

An insightful piece of poetry depicting deplorable and hard conditions under which most African orphans exist on daily basis. I simply refer to these very unfortunate situations as modern-day slavery. Child labour is an international crime but lack of awareness, cultural practices, nonchalant attribute of governments... are some of the main reasons for the continued perpetuation of crime against children. Thanks for bringing to limelight a very serious international issue. Kudos! And remain blessed.

Wow! This is a very touching story, how a family have been split up because the head of the family wasn't there at the moment. It is a touching untold story, thank God we are here to listen to you, here is a shoulder to lean on... Great write, I love it.