Tuesday, June 28, 2011

The Untold Feeling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I cry when you are in pain,
Never let you fall sick,
never made you wear dirty cloths,
never let you starve for food,
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Annie Juliet
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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