The Untimely Cloud (After We Met-2) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

The Untimely Cloud (After We Met-2)

Rating: 5.0


Never ever can I
Leave this world
Laden with the You-ness of you....

Never ever Can I
Go away
From the ground
You walked upon,
From the Streams
You dipped inside,
From the buds and birds
You talked to,
From the meadows open
And leaves green
You looked into.

I can't be outside...Of that world-
Beyond the borders of warmth,
Beneath the depths of weakness,
I can't...
Can't live with the air
You never have breathed!

I'm yet to know
About this untimely cloud-
That made me wet and Chilled
My body,
My mind,
My heart,
And the infinite summer thirst-
Of agony and discontentment...
How all it had quenched
Before it rained at all?

Friday, April 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 08 June 2016

I'm yet to know About this untimely cloud- That made me wet and Chilled My body, My mind, My heart, And the infinite summer thirst- Of agony and discontentment... How all it had quenched Before it rained at all? Felt like taking a bath in that rain of love. Thanks for the poem.10 for it.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Sabita dear for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Anita Aparajita Das 19 May 2016

I'm yet to know About this untimely cloud- That made me wet and Chilled My body, My mind, My heart, And the infinite summer thirst- Of agony and discontentment... How all it had quenched Before it rained at all? Loved it. Thanks for the poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks Neetu for the remarks, so sweet of you.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 29 April 2016

Never ever Can I Go away From the ground You walked upon, From the Streams You dipped inside, From the buds and birds You talked to, From the meadows open And leaves green You looked into. I can't be outside...Of that world- Beyond the borders of warmth, Beneath the depths of weakness, I can't... Can't live with the air You never have breathed! Are you an expert in the art of love? I feel like it. It appears that these are related to some episode of your life, Is it true? ? However I loved these lines a lot. Thanks. I give a 10 for it. Thanks. Seema Devi

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 October 2017

Thanks dear Rini for the lovely remarks, so sweet of you.

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Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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