Wednesday, March 6, 2013

The Unspoken Murmurs Comments

Rating: 4.5

Cry Hard!
Tears on your face, a remedy for the drought.
Cry Hard!
That it seems your body is turning inside out.
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Sameera Alshaikh
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Guess Who 15 March 2013

Nice poem, Very moving and emotional Good write. GuessWho

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Aria Siren 14 March 2013

I like this one. Short poems can hit even more powerfully and this one does.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 13 March 2013

poems are written from the heart, in this poem, i felt you are experiencing this lament, nice poem. well written, keep it up

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Persian Khushi 12 March 2013

wow an excellent write. many of us can relate. beautifully crafted POETESS.. :) this this is what you are!

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Jillian Ward 12 March 2013

Many a time can I relate. Nicely written.

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Linda A 10 March 2013

Beautiful poem :) reads nicely

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Jahan Zeb 07 March 2013

MashALLAH. An array of nice thought.

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Sallam Yassin 06 March 2013

wise and spiritually, touching the heart keep composing U are (the golden light)

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adil Khan 06 March 2013

wow so touching lines.keep it up: -)

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