The Unspoken Murmurs Comments

Nice poem, Very moving and emotional Good write. GuessWho

I like this one. Short poems can hit even more powerfully and this one does.

poems are written from the heart, in this poem, i felt you are experiencing this lament, nice poem. well written, keep it up

wow an excellent write. many of us can relate. beautifully crafted POETESS.. :) this this is what you are!

Many a time can I relate. Nicely written.

Beautiful poem :) reads nicely

MashALLAH. An array of nice thought.

wise and spiritually, touching the heart keep composing U are (the golden light)

wow so touching lines.keep it up: -)