Wednesday, April 8, 2015

The Unspoken Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day arose and stars trailed off
The sky had drawn the brighter sun
I pulled my chair and with a soft and silent breath I had begun;
Sitting calmly at my seat
...
Read full text

Naima Ansari
COMMENTS
Naima Ansari 18 April 2015

Thanks to you Miss Geetha and Mr.Kelly for your comments as these comments make me enthusiastic. I would request you kind readers to please keep on giving your views about these poems and so will I do. Thankyou!

1 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 17 April 2015

Beautiful Unspoken Love, Spoken with strong words. Beautiful flow of words, I loved reading it from beginning till end. A fantastic write Naima. Keep writing.

1 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 08 April 2015

Beautiful poem, Naima. Thanks for sharing it

1 0 Reply
Naima Ansari

Naima Ansari

Varanasi
Close
Error Success