The Unseen Messenger.... Comments

In the mystery of sleeping hearts10++(+++

The fastest vehicle is thought, which goes next second to the other side of the world-a nice piece of work.

Subhash, Again, I love the premise of this… dreams traveling miles to convey things…. But on the nitpicky side the non-standard rhyme is distracting me a bit. Perhaps it’s just me on that count though… I tend to like a certain rhythm to my rhymes. I hope the critiques are helpful to you. Keep writing! -Eila

wow! ...this is a beautiful poem.. Asma...

I like this soft and elegant poem.

A lot of strength in a short amount of words. Well written

very good, en, you are from the homeland of Tagore, and bless you be a great poet one day!

That was good.....it's great how you guys from Keralyies write so well, maybe it has to do with the english that is so stressed upon there! Preets

Good poetry. Short, but fine. My salute to Keralite lyricists!