Wednesday, August 2, 2006

The Unseen Companion Comments

Rating: 5.0

I walked along the narrow alley
It walked along behind me
When I stopped, it stopped too
Yet like an echo, I had heard
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Marilyn Shepperson
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Abdul Basit 04 August 2006

its deep, fascinating and a nice poem......

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Lesa K 02 August 2006

I like the mystery you leave in this piece! In the end, I too thought you might reveal what 'it' was. Although I'm not sure... I think you were speaking of 'hope.' Great read.

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free birds 02 August 2006

'Hope' Dear freind can come back at any time. Just watch out

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