Tuesday, July 23, 2013

The Unrolling Expanse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Before my eyes,
The sea stretches far;
An infinite scroll of chiffon
Rolling and unrolling
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Valsa George
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Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2017

Between the blue sky above And the blue sea below I see seagulls fly, The long beaked pelicans prey, ............... If it'sa well planned earth why life depends on preying the weaker creatures. I thought a lot but I could not understand. Valsa George thinks more than me, writes better poems than me and definitely she is suprior to me. I expect a reply from her on this topic.

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Rajnish Manga 28 January 2016

Valsa ji, you have very deftly recreated the magic of a sea-shore pulsating with charming gifts of nature and captivating glimpses of marine life. Those who have not seen it will be envious. An infinite scroll of chiffon / Rolling and unrolling / In shades of green and sapphire / Lying in majesty / Swinging in ecstasy /.. And what delectable mélange / Of tinkling sensory delights!

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Amitava Sur 22 January 2014

Excellent description of the sea with it's minute detailing.I loved the comparison with mammoth silver submarine, ..... as if I am experiencing standing on the bank of the sea.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 31 July 2013

Within this mammoth silver submarine, How many mysterious live forms thrive! Brilliant!

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Dinesan Madathil 31 July 2013

It is perhaps one of the most well crafted poems on the PH ever. The synchronization of thoughts and expressions makes a mystic impact on the minds of the readers and the optimistic note leaves a pleasant memory. Quite proud you have to be Madam Valsa for penning down this beautiful piece and here I click on the button giving a 10 for you!

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R.j. Wynn 30 July 2013

Woo hoo! You are vast in your knowledge of the heavenly ways.

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Patricia Grantham 28 July 2013

Oh so beautiful description of the seashore which I do no live near. Just thinking of the sweet serenity of the calm waves and wafting aroma from the sea. An infinite scroll of chiffon is a very charming line that is full of grace describing a never ending stretch of a waving glistening sea. An excellent write.

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Danny Draper 26 July 2013

After recently being lucky enough to snorkel on the Great Barrier Reef of Cairns I can fully appreciate this aquatic paradise its lilting waves and flow of life. A lovely descriptive and atmospheric write.

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Danny Draper 26 July 2013

After recently being lucky enough to snorkel on the Great Barrier Reef of Cairns I can fully appreciate this aquatic paradise its lilting waves and flow of life. A lovely descriptive and atmospheric write.

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Danny Draper 26 July 2013

After recently being lucky enough to snorkel on the Great Barrier Reef of Cairns I can fully appreciate this aquatic paradise its lilting waves and flow of life. A lovely descriptive and atmospheric write.

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David Wood 26 July 2013

Many years ago I used to be a scuba-diver and I can see the images you have depicted here. A lovely poem Valsa.

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A good photographic narration of the coastal experience.

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Tribhawan Kaul 24 July 2013

A great imagery woven through the words unrolling the expanse before our eyes. Beautifully composed poem.

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Neela Nath Das 24 July 2013

I am watching a movie.So cinematic effect is here in this stupendously beautiful poem!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 July 2013

A fantastic poem on the Sea! The beautiful imagery of the waves, the flora and fauna of the sea, spotting the distant hull of the ship, piles of silver clouds above and the golden sandy stretch all capture the heart. We are with you enjoying the splendid; scene! Thanks for sharing this fabulous write, Valsa!

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Lyn Paul 24 July 2013

True beauty written in your words. You make it sound like a magical fairytale yet this is actually real beauty. I walk the ocean every day and see the dolphins most days. The ocean as unknown healing powers. I thank you and will get great pleasure saving this.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 July 2013

An evening at the seashore beautifully described. I can feel the waves of the sea and movement of seagulls. Nice poem. Thank you.

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Kavya . 24 July 2013

an aquatic poem overall! powerful words used.....loved it

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Valerie Dohren 23 July 2013

You paint a glorious picture of the sea, with some great lines. Great read.

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Kee Thampi 23 July 2013

I love the beauty of a Oh! What a splendid scene In the rosy gleam of this evening! And what delectable mélange

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