Tuesday, March 6, 2012

The Unreachable Star Comments

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To do the best in your test
To be safe in the unsafeble world
To fight with people to get the right
To see the light from far far away
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Basma Amir
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Basma Amir 03 April 2012

Thanks so much Ohood hope u too to reach ur star: D

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Ohood Al.shabibi 30 March 2012

You have great feelings and they are standing tight in this poem believe me u won't reach one star. You are going to reach hundreds of them. :)

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Basma Amir 24 March 2012

thanks Ahmed! ! ! .........

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Ahmed Abomahfouz 24 March 2012

strong poem. sent the hope to my heart

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Basma Amir 22 March 2012

thanks Sara, sorry cause i wrote the poem from my callphone, i had some wrong spelling

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Sara Hosseini 16 March 2012

Hope you reach that star! but you had some spelling errors my friend :)

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