Friday, June 19, 2020

The Unprivileged... Comments

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Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
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Varsha M
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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 May 2021

Yes, that's true! I appreciate the spirit of this thoughtful work!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 October 2020

Often the poor possess an inner joy that is not dependent on material things, and sometimes the rich are miserable, no matter how much they have. Happiness is a way of traveling, as your wonderful poem illustrates.

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Panagiota Romios 26 July 2020

What a wonderful concept and poem, Varshs Panagiota Romios xx

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beautiful, , lovely portraying the helplessness.. clear 10 Feel not unprivileged Wednesday,15th July 2020 everybody is privileged and favored with little more or less afforded one feels secure in an environment to present the case at present Hasmukh Mehta

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So lovely and beautiful.. well verses.. real 10 Somewhere life remains kind and finds Some alternative for the downtrodden And makes them feel heaven here Hasmukh Mehta

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 June 2020

Sitting on the gravel gray Fighting like a mad ray Totally unaware what others say Often I feel The unprivileged Is the most privileged. this is a real meditation on the faces of the poor and their life. love this poem. tony

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The poor section of the society like the the labourers, farmers, daily wagers may not have much material possession but they learn to live and be happy with what they have. They live a life of contentment. That is secret of their happiness... A fabulous picture with the poem.......10

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Anjandev Roy 28 June 2020

This is glorious write.....thank u. anjandev roy.

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Bharati Nayak 21 June 2020

A thought provoking poem. There is a saying that; A distant hill looks beautiful' If we go near the hill, we may not find that beauty that was appealing us from a distance. We have not seen the pain or sufferings of underprivileged from close quarters and may think that they are privileged as they do not have much to care about.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2020

Roaming like a free bird! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 June 2020

The unprivileged Is the most privileged.....sometimes... Yeah the truth is sharper Nothing comes without author.....wonderfully expressed

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Varsha M 19 June 2020

Thank-you for understanding the expressions. Yeah sometimes these previledges are awesome.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2020

Sitting on the gravel gray/Fighting like a mad ray/Totally unaware what others say/Often I feel The unprivileged/Is the most privileged......scintillating poetic expression! A thought provoking write........10/10

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Varsha M 19 June 2020

Thank-you sir for making it scintillating. Honoured sir. Thank-you.

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