The Unplanned Family Comments

This is abominable..... not the poem but the story (?) or (real incident?) ! ! The twist at the end is shocking! !

It is a story of honest and dishonest humouracally presented and it ends with nasty picture. Thanks to poet Mr Akhtar Ji for his stunning expression of this poem. .....10

Ironic with a touch of humour .The twist to the story was the last straw .Enjoyed the word flow. Thanks

The surprise ending was delightfully nasty.: -)