Tuesday, March 11, 2008

The Unlover Comments

Rating: 5.0

I''m in love and I don't know why,
In love with someone who doesn't love me.
Not in that way at least.
She will never love me that way.
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Joseph Cross
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Allysyn Bryant 21 May 2008

Love. Fear of Love. Pain from Love. And straight up honestly. This poem shows it all. Great work!

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Marie Sowders 08 April 2008

great way to describe you true effections for some one who doesnt love you and everyone goes through it

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Brittany Marsh 11 March 2008

very well writen =] i like it

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Original Unknown Girl 11 March 2008

A clever depiction of unrequited love and the pain it brings. I love the final 3 lines of this, think most people have felt this way at one time or another. HG: -) xx

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Joseph Cross

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