Thursday, September 11, 2008

The Unlit Lighthouse At The Rock Comments

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His reckless soul ship heads towards you
And he imagines a faint light flickers afar
But he cannot stop his engines
As his adamant destiny has written to hit the rock
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 20 September 2008

NImal your use of metaphor is brilliant and emotionally very powerful. This poem is a fine and fitting tribute to the victims of 9/11 and their grieving families. So sad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 12 September 2008

A very unique tribute to the victims of 9/11 and their families. Beautifully written and delivered. No doubt your mother would also give you a ten. Always your friend, Sandra

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