Sunday, October 16, 2016
The Unknown Destination Comments
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I knew destinations of my entire body,
my hairs' destination was a hand with a brush,
that dressed it.
My forehead's destination was two caressing lips,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul
16 October 2016
A marvellous poem shared really. The most important line of this poem I like is.... And my whole body's destination was a mother.....10
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7/21/2025 8:13:06 AM # 1.0.0
Truly, a profound poem with a wonderful realisation! The present life's destination is through the mother who gave life, tender care and pure love. The unknown destination is through the Mother of the universe who leads us in her own mysterious way. Jawad Sahab, You are truly a marvellous poet of a high calibre! 10+++