Sunday, July 11, 2010

The Unknown African Baby Comments

Rating: 5.0

There it lies, the unknown African baby
On warm and fertile African soil
Its birth place, as supple
And tender as a larva ejected
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Elena Sandu 25 July 2010

I needed only a few minutes to read your poem..but my mind and soul travelled more then a life time.. I found in things that sometimes doesn't let me sleep..so many thoughts and wanders in such a tiny space! You wrote it well and touched my heart awaked wonders deep inside..10

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What a well expressed poem, the whole image of the write was well caught by your pen. Kept me attentive as I read! Lovely; D

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Zaynab Elzain 11 July 2010

gd poem... nice chose of the subject cause i never think about that...gd work

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