The Unknown Comments

This poet really worth a good height in writes Thunder rumbling near yet so far Children anticipating rainfall Adults preparing their vessels (How wonderful... imagess..)

i like it like a story form and old town. yeah idk. Lylyanna

The unknown may be a storm or flood, which takes a toll of lives. Life is also like that.

Very nice poem Ayisha. I could not help but feel a sense of foreboding in your poem, albeit, disguised.

very nice thought in ur poem