Thursday, March 27, 2008

The Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

The babble
Of the seas
Is nestled
In the shell…
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Ramin Chaman 20 October 2009

Or Like a puff of smoke..a pictorial style...indeed a nice epigram..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 September 2008

Yes, this is a beautiful image of the universe 'Like a soap bubble.'. Enjoyed much.

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Raveendran . 15 May 2008

The inscrutablity of the end adds gaiety to the opening.

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K. V. Venkataramana 05 April 2008

Beautiful imagery, Tsira. Only you can write such short and significant poems.

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Gregory Collins 01 April 2008

compressed insight and wit because life is short with its clever twists

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Flora Gillingham 27 March 2008

Love this little epigram. F

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