The universe seems to be
A puzzle I must assemble
A million pieces, disordered and crumbled
And two of them - you and me
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Hi, Galina! It really is a very nice poem. I am sure you will assemble your magic cube and put all together in the right place. Best wishes and regards to you and your family. Yours sincerely,
You have the power in your hands to turn, anything you touch, into gold. Awesome piece of a master.
Gale, what about adding this poem of yours in the compilation ''Our Chains, Our Dreams''? Let me know, if it's ok Ciao F.
Imagine the future! But, with the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing.
Don't care about my time Believe, I would spend it all To put it together, to reach for your soul To picture the world of mine such a great hope after not worrying about the past. thank you for this poem of hope. tony
My heartiest congratulations on this poem being the 'Poem Of The Day'! I read this beautiful piece again and got amazed again. Truly a gem of a poem.
Thank you all for reading and commenting! I appreciate your attention very much. And thank you for Poem of the Day! It's a great honour for me!
Enjoyed this poem very much. I like the idea of the universe being a puzzle, because I like puzzles of almost every kind. Congrats on Poem of the Day!
Lovely poem. Like the line about universe being a sheet and a cube. Also loved your optimism.
A lovely and well penned piece of poetry. Kudos Galina. Am happy to see you poem featuring today on PH home page. Always remain blessed.
Kind of a Mega level thinking, focusing poet's own heart. In the whole Universe, she feels, there is nohing more important than her heart. Exquisitely penned. I like it.
What I took from this is it's a nice way of saying you are my world in a never ending imagination(universe) that is constantly in a state of change and that it doesn't matter how long it takes (time being relative) that you will dedicate every second of life into making your love work no matter what changes may come that you will grow and evolve in every way as the world does the same around you. I also like the idea of the magic cube. Death is but a door and chaos a ladder where destruction brings about creation. Nicely done and congrats on P.o.t.d.
Howsoever small we human beings might appear vis-a-vis this vast universe, our role will remain ever important when we make bridges between man and man to strengthen our social fabric. Thanks for a very impressive poem.
Universe when converged in a poetic heart becomes a beautiful poem like this................10
A wonderful verse about creating, assembling, nurturing the ingredients of true love.... beautifully crafted verse, simple words cleverly arranged to emphasize the simplicity of form but at the same time magnify the vivid images they portray.