Sunday, November 9, 2014

The Universe Comments

Rating: 4.7

The universe seems to be
A puzzle I must assemble
A million pieces, disordered and crumbled
And two of them - you and me
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Galina Italyanskaya
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C F 24 February 2019

A wonderful verse about creating, assembling, nurturing the ingredients of true love.... beautifully crafted verse, simple words cleverly arranged to emphasize the simplicity of form but at the same time magnify the vivid images they portray.

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Valentin Savin 03 December 2017

Hi, Galina! It really is a very nice poem. I am sure you will assemble your magic cube and put all together in the right place. Best wishes and regards to you and your family. Yours sincerely,

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Sochukwu Ivye 24 October 2017

You have the power in your hands to turn, anything you touch, into gold. Awesome piece of a master.

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Fabrizio Frosini 05 January 2017

good, Gale! your poem will be in the book.

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Fabrizio Frosini 04 January 2017

Gale, what about adding this poem of yours in the compilation ''Our Chains, Our Dreams''? Let me know, if it's ok Ciao F.

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Soul Watcher 08 April 2016

Wow, very nice poem, thanks a lot for sharing it with us.

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Anzelyne Shideshe 28 March 2016

A lovely Pierce of write! Keep writing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 March 2016

Imagine the future! But, with the works of the truth. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 January 2016

Don't care about my time Believe, I would spend it all To put it together, to reach for your soul To picture the world of mine such a great hope after not worrying about the past. thank you for this poem of hope. tony

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 07 January 2016

Verily, a lovely piece of art.....10

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Khairul Ahsan 15 May 2015

My heartiest congratulations on this poem being the 'Poem Of The Day'! I read this beautiful piece again and got amazed again. Truly a gem of a poem.

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Thank you very much, Khairul! I'm glad that you liked it/

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Galina Italyanskaya 04 February 2015

Thank you all for reading and commenting! I appreciate your attention very much. And thank you for Poem of the Day! It's a great honour for me!

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Kim Barney 04 February 2015

Enjoyed this poem very much. I like the idea of the universe being a puzzle, because I like puzzles of almost every kind. Congrats on Poem of the Day!

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Savita Tyagi 04 February 2015

Lovely poem. Like the line about universe being a sheet and a cube. Also loved your optimism.

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Chinedu Dike 04 February 2015

A lovely and well penned piece of poetry. Kudos Galina. Am happy to see you poem featuring today on PH home page. Always remain blessed.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 04 February 2015

Kind of a Mega level thinking, focusing poet's own heart. In the whole Universe, she feels, there is nohing more important than her heart. Exquisitely penned. I like it.

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E Nigma 04 February 2015

What I took from this is it's a nice way of saying you are my world in a never ending imagination(universe) that is constantly in a state of change and that it doesn't matter how long it takes (time being relative) that you will dedicate every second of life into making your love work no matter what changes may come that you will grow and evolve in every way as the world does the same around you. I also like the idea of the magic cube. Death is but a door and chaos a ladder where destruction brings about creation. Nicely done and congrats on P.o.t.d.

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Rajnish Manga 04 February 2015

Howsoever small we human beings might appear vis-a-vis this vast universe, our role will remain ever important when we make bridges between man and man to strengthen our social fabric. Thanks for a very impressive poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2015

Universe when converged in a poetic heart becomes a beautiful poem like this................10

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 December 2014

lovely poem, I like the inner music of your lines.

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