The Universe Comments

this almost sounds like star trek or possiblly battlestar galactica. but it is absolutely superb. i love the imagery and the flow is always perfect. truly loved this one.

I'm guessing this has something to do with Stargate, however, it brought to mind the tragic ship that was severly damaged during an electromagnetic experiment devised to create invisibility during wartime. I don't recall the name of that ship, but it was called the Phiiladelphia Experiment. Anyway, probably way off base here, but I did enjoy this poem, GW - great use of vivid imagery creating one heck of a scenerio. Worthy of a 10 from me! Linda :)

I enjoyed it my friend....! ! ! Good message encompassed in a well-done writing....! ! !

WOW! ! ! WOLFIE! ! ! ! What a lesson to learn.Good flow, kept it going.do you really think we will learn......before we burn?

A marvelous poem on the universe, legendery job is done. I love it.